Writing has always been a passion and starting this blog is basically baby steps towards becoming the published author I want to become. I have been low key writing eBooks I haven’t shared with my readers because basically I think its not good enough but thinking of it I felt sharing with people to seek their view on something I have written will help me be better and work towards that dream of being published.
Attached is an eBook I wrote a few months ago titled ‘sold by tradition’
The very first eBook I wrote fictionally based on child marriages in my country. Feel free to download and read an amateurs work. I will be happy to read feedbacks criticisms and recommendations. Let me know what you think about it.
Download here- SOLD BY TRADITION
Congratulations on your book. It looks interesting, and educative. I will definitely check it out.
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Do please leave feedback when you check it out. Thanks for stopping by.
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I can download but am unable to actually open. Do you offer it in any other format?
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yeah I do… I will send it directly to your email address.
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Congrats on your book, what an accomplishment. A goal of mine in life, but who knows!
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Wow!! Congratulations on your book!! What a great accomplishment. Keep it up.
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Congratulations on your book girl! I will download it now!
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Congrats on your first release… this is a big accomplishment
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Thanks for sharing your book with us! I will read it and provide some feedback~ Hope that I have a book written soon too~
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I will definitely check, books are always the endless source. Your book is very meaningful, it is educational and humanity is high. Congratulation!
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Hi Jossy,
You requested feedback for your book, “Sold By Tradition”. First, I want to congratulate you for writing it and moving forward with posting it. It takes a lot of courage to request feedback.
You have a good story to tell. However, it is difficult reading for two main reasons:
1. Many of your sentences are run-on and need restructuring.
2. Several of your paragraphs are quite lengthy, and they should be broken down into two or three.
It will take a lot of time to revise, but that is what writing is about. Write, re-write, and re-write some more. Eliminate the unnecessary. Every writer needs to know how to self-edit and make corrections even if they hire a professional editor. An editor will not take the time to do a writer’s work.
Keep writing. Work on revising your book. You really do have a good story.
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Thanks so much for your honest views on my work, i guess i am still an amateur learning the game of how this writing thing is done write. i must say i am quite overwhelmed by how much time it takes to write that perfect book, i know i am still beginning, i will take on your advise and try to work harder on my craft . Thanks so much for taking the time out to write this honest feedback, you have no idea how much i appreciate it.
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